Excerpt from my story, need advice, pointers, opinions, ect. Thanks! 10 points!!?

I would definitely keep reading. Well I didn't really like the name Scar it kinda stuck out like a sore thumb and well not a big topic of importance but what are her parent's jobs? So they can pay for Scarlett to go to boarding school? I think you need to establish their careers. I like it so far and you can have an infinite amount of plots from that beginning too. The best of luck ^-^